New track.

So... This is my new track. Give me some feedback please. Thank you.

http://soundcloud.com/adambeker/garrry

like the intro, find the beat terrible, the bass sounds overcompressed, in an ugly way. the transition @ 1:35 could be better. i like the beat based moment, along with the melody that comes on top. then i don't really get the progression. @ 3:00 it's getting a bit too repetitive. love the synth that comes @ 3:20 but it's too shooooooooort! it was really bringing something, maybe it should come earlier and more progressively, it might loop well to the beat moment @ 1:39.

is the track finished?

what gear have you been using?

Thanks for the feedback man. Do you find the beat terrible because it's just simple house beat or for other reasons? The sound which comes @3.20 is actually just a reversed delay of the intro. I doubt this track is finished but i don't think i'll ever touch it again.

You asked me once about gear. It's just fl studio with mostly free plugins and midi keyboard.

really good song, great job man. i'd just drop the dblue glitch stretch and reverse, that's all

Thanks.

i like the part @ 1:40... feel like it takes to long to build and conclude and i'm with yan about the beat

i like the bassline, maybe just need to change it up a bit