Guest Adam Posted December 11, 2010 Report Share Posted December 11, 2010 So... This is my new track. Give me some feedback please. Thank you. http://soundcloud.com/adambeker/garrry Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62124-new-track/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted December 11, 2010 Report Share Posted December 11, 2010 like the intro, find the beat terrible, the bass sounds overcompressed, in an ugly way. the transition @ 1:35 could be better. i like the beat based moment, along with the melody that comes on top. then i don't really get the progression. @ 3:00 it's getting a bit too repetitive. love the synth that comes @ 3:20 but it's too shooooooooort! it was really bringing something, maybe it should come earlier and more progressively, it might loop well to the beat moment @ 1:39. is the track finished? what gear have you been using? Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62124-new-track/#findComment-1474677 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 Thanks for the feedback man. Do you find the beat terrible because it's just simple house beat or for other reasons? The sound which comes @3.20 is actually just a reversed delay of the intro. I doubt this track is finished but i don't think i'll ever touch it again. You asked me once about gear. It's just fl studio with mostly free plugins and midi keyboard. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62124-new-track/#findComment-1474913 Share on other sites More sharing options...
candlestickmaker Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 really good song, great job man. i'd just drop the dblue glitch stretch and reverse, that's all Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide candlestickmaker's signature Hide all signatures soundcloud.com/wearefjord soundcloud.com/mountain-1 soundcloud.com/candlestickmaker Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62124-new-track/#findComment-1474928 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Thanks. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62124-new-track/#findComment-1475911 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht tne Posted December 14, 2010 Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 i like the part @ 1:40... feel like it takes to long to build and conclude and i'm with yan about the beat Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62124-new-track/#findComment-1476011 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sweater weather Posted December 14, 2010 Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 i like the bassline, maybe just need to change it up a bit Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62124-new-track/#findComment-1476375 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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