a track

First track I did in months. needs feedback

Cheers!

http://soundcloud.com/nao_s/evoxian-1/s-e3Y0M

i like it but i think it should be longer with more progression or the same length with more progression, it's kind of monochromatic... but it's good!

  On 12/21/2010 at 9:53 PM, tht tne said:

i like it but i think it should be longer with more progression or the same length with more progression, it's kind of monochromatic... but it's good!

well thanks!

i also think it's good! could use some more progression as tht said, but it's still a good tune.

basically - what tht tne said.

  On 12/22/2010 at 8:52 PM, BCM said:

i also think it's good! could use some more progression as tht said, but it's still a good tune.

 

basically - what tht tne said.

Thanks BCM and tht tne, your input is much appreciated! I've put myself under some sort of wierd artificial pressure to finish a track before christmass and as much as I'm happy with it, I understand that I could have been a bit longer and perhaps richer with textures.

pretty tight, mon.

reminds me a lot of Source Direct but cleaner..

nice! reminds me of the good old times

i think it misses some groove, maybe try adding some more hi hats or cymbals

  On 12/23/2010 at 6:16 PM, MildewOnRice said:

pretty tight, mon.

reminds me a lot of Source Direct but cleaner..

Thanks, actually, I was thinking of Source Direct while working on this, even though I haven't played their tunes in years. Will do that.

  On 12/23/2010 at 6:33 PM, Brian Tregaskin said:

nice! reminds me of the good old times

Thank you Mr. Tregaskin!

  On 12/24/2010 at 3:29 PM, THIS IS MICHAEL JACKSON said:

i think it misses some groove, maybe try adding some more hi hats or cymbals

That's a good proposition. I want to do something with it. The basses are actually to deep

to notice most of the time. I guess some cymbals+higher bass tones might help.