Guest Blanket Fort Collapse Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 http://soundcloud.com/stenotic/stenotic-never-let-me-go-sans-vox-demo Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Blanket Fort Collapse Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 I would very much appreciate any and all constructive criticism on this track as I want to make it the best as possible. Keep in mind it's structured to fit vocals. The drums are mostly Superior Drummer 2 Piano is PianoteQ 2.3 Harps are String Studio Bass is Reason Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/#findComment-1488821 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 it's hard to say, the voice would change it all. the drums seemed low in the mix in the beginning, i guess it's intentional since they seem to boom up when the bass enters but i'm not sure it's necessary. they might deserve to be louder in the beginning. then again the voice could make me change my mind completely, dunno. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/#findComment-1488929 Share on other sites More sharing options...
cruising for burgers Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 (edited) Never Let Me Go (the movie) spoiler Reveal hidden contents they were clones???????'' WTF Edited January 4, 2011 by Squee Remember to use spoilers unless you wanna be a dick and ruin the movie for the rest of us. Dick. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide cruising for burgers's signature Hide all signatures https://www.instagram.com/ancestralwaves/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/#findComment-1488936 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 On 1/4/2011 at 4:36 PM, THIS IS MICHAEL JACKSON said: Never Let Me Go (the movie) spoilers! Reveal hidden contents they were clones???????'' WTF You dick! Back to the music: What's up with the bass? Needs more punch. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/#findComment-1488949 Share on other sites More sharing options...
cruising for burgers Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 (edited) Reveal hidden contents geeeezzz i'm sorry i really didn't want to spoil it, didn't even thought about it. but man, it's almost granted, it's not any conclusion to the film or something like that... though i didn't perceived it. i loved this track, in terms of composition it is great, top notch, but production wise, it kinda lacks in bass yeah. you'd you consider making this acidish??? Edited January 5, 2011 by THIS IS MICHAEL JACKSON Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide cruising for burgers's signature Hide all signatures https://www.instagram.com/ancestralwaves/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/#findComment-1489258 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Blanket Fort Collapse Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Thanks dudes. I am going to be adding some raw hip hopish bass drum like elements to this and I will make sure the low end is punching. I really want to give this track I really high level of euphoria and I am going to try and see if an acid style synth will sound cohesive if not I will probably record some nice bass on the intro and guitar on the 2nd half. Should be done with the instrumental and maybe vocals as well on this track in the next few days. Anymore input before I finish this song? Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/#findComment-1492865 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atop Posted January 11, 2011 Report Share Posted January 11, 2011 yeah, just more low end, which you said you are doing and this is a really nice piece of music... Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Atop's signature Hide all signatures music by ATOPdj mixes by ATOP https://woodbetweenworlds.bandcamp.com/album/777 https://auralcanyonmusic.bandcamp.com/album/once-i-was-as-you-are-now Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/#findComment-1492983 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Master Shives Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 it is sounding good my friend. can't wait to drop some sick vocals to it. def got to get mr. wood to laydown some bass as well, got to agree wit em it really does need some more low end for sure. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/#findComment-1497368 Share on other sites More sharing options...
cruising for burgers Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 (edited) where's the punching low end you promised??? Edited January 17, 2011 by THIS IS MICHAEL JACKSON Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide cruising for burgers's signature Hide all signatures https://www.instagram.com/ancestralwaves/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/#findComment-1497434 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Blanket Fort Collapse Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 It's cuming, started a few other new songs I have been working on. I am definitely looking forward to finishing this song very soon. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/62684-never-let-me-go/#findComment-1497996 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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