reworked from your critiques

i remember you commenting on making it shorter and someone mentioning the "club chords".... it made me keep working on it.... so here is the alternate version... thanks for the knudge'n

here was the original post:

original pebbles and papers

i maybe subbed out some charm for humor.. oh well

I like how you keep the master at a reasonable level instead of pumping up the volume like so many people do on soundcloud.

I haven't listened to the original yet but i'm loving this. it's really nicely mixed, everything sounds crisp even when there's a lot going on in the background. the ending is pretty tastefully weird, i like how long it goes on.

thanks for listening... snare has some eq work on it. slide and shuffle got me that flippidy circular style beat there in the beginning. The post work is really what helps with the clarity of the mix and reverb of the snare where i only tampered with the frequencies that were being drowned out.