renewal offset

not sure about the transition @ 1:35, i'm trying to find a way to connect the first and latter parts... :scratches head:

any ideas welcome!

melodies are ok but i would ditch the bit crusher

the transition didnt seem that off kilter or out of place

  On 2/10/2011 at 8:58 PM, Jaffa said:

melodies are ok but i would ditch the bit crusher

the transition didnt seem that off kilter or out of place

thanks Jaffa! what's wrong with the bit crusher?

file updated! i'd like to know if it sounds finished to you, i'm especially wondering abuot the transitions. any comment and constructive criticism welcome!