New Blacks Track

Hey I posted this on soundcloud a few days ago but I wanted to get some advice on it. I'm really looking to see if you guys think that track's full enough, that is, is it good as is or does it still need something to push it over the top? I hadn't planned on adding any vocals to this one but I would be interested to hear what other people thought. So you other people: let me know what you think. Thanks much.

http://soundcloud.com/blackstracks/fractions

Something definitely needs to be done about the drums. You can barely hear them.

  On 3/14/2011 at 11:00 PM, Squee said:

Something definitely needs to be done about the drums. You can barely hear them.

Mmm good call, I listened to it through and I will boost the drums in the first half, sounds to me like the levels are alright in and after the break though.

yeah make the percussion really heavy with loud 80s style snares!

also you can tell you made it entirely with one piece of software lol

  On 3/15/2011 at 2:17 AM, ezkerraldean said:

also you can tell you made it entirely with one piece of software lol

what does that mean?