Guest tompty Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 http://soundcloud.com/tomrushmore/sunday-nap Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/65565-sunday-nap/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissolvedpaul Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Not bad, pleasant enough melodies, the title describes the overall vibe well. It's obviously very short and with the minimal beatwork it sort of feels kind of sketchy, could use a bassline perhaps. As it is, there doesn't seem to be much room for it to go else where, pretty samey throughout. It would be a good album Segue. Production is a wee bit flat, a bit of EQ tweaking to make it sparkle would certainly help. Spying some nice hardware in your Avatar, used in this? Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Dissolvedpaul's signature Hide all signatures Dissolvedamberrooms Soundcloud Bandcamp Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/65565-sunday-nap/#findComment-1564997 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tompty Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 fanks for the feedback. yeah there is quite a bit I could do with this track, it was just a 1 hour noodle really. reckon I should develop it? Got the 101 doing the higher pitched melody, using a prophet 2002 sampling the 101 for polyphony for main melody Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/65565-sunday-nap/#findComment-1565006 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissolvedpaul Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 On 4/22/2011 at 3:00 AM, tompty said: it was just a 1 hour noodle really. reckon I should develop it? Absolutely, I'd actively encourage it! I'd love to hear where this could go, you've got some lush hardware sitting there, endless possibilities. Your melodies like I said are good, you've got a strong basis with them, maybe introduce a third more sawish loop in there, the layed back 80's vibe works in its favour,definitely play with a bassline and strengthen the beats, an extra 3 minutes on this would be great. Keeping my ears open. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Dissolvedpaul's signature Hide all signatures Dissolvedamberrooms Soundcloud Bandcamp Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/65565-sunday-nap/#findComment-1565011 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest hahathhat Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 i took a hardcore nap this afternoon Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/65565-sunday-nap/#findComment-1565030 Share on other sites More sharing options...
gunnar Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 Very nice Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/65565-sunday-nap/#findComment-1565092 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tompty Posted April 22, 2011 Report Share Posted April 22, 2011 On 4/22/2011 at 3:44 AM, hahathhat said: i took a hardcore nap this afternoon sleeping furiously Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/65565-sunday-nap/#findComment-1565215 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubba69 Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 meh this is kind of boring to be honest. It is pretty funny but pretty lame at the same time. It might work for an awkward sex scene in a B-grade comedy. My point is that different kinds of music works in different contexts. This is really boring and does nothing for me while sitting in front of my laptop listening to it on it's own. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Bubba69's signature Hide all signatures https://intervallux.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/65565-sunday-nap/#findComment-1566225 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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