Stumpf

New tune up:

http://soundcloud.com/zeitgeber24/stumpf/

lovely.

  On 4/24/2011 at 4:13 PM, vincentvc said:

lovely.

yes

i guess the atonal synth line in the beginning is intentional... it doesn't sound bad, it just took me by surprise...

the composition (songwriting) is damn good, i like the way it starts, the way elements introduce themselves... the cool mid-east influenced vibe with the tubular bass being my favorite parts.

i would suggest you find some creative uses for SILENCE in this track... because i think it has something to say, but i'm waiting for it until then end, when i realize it was saying it all along.

great track!

cheers,

eric

Hey, very nice to hear what you got out of it. The way I wrote it is intentionally very terse. I'll keep the silence thing in mind, that's a good one. Thanks

great song writing! you have a good ear for progression.

sounds like ozric tentacles

the synth level drops down when the drums come in