Acid track titled "Stars Connect Civilizations", to be released as a video

http://soundcloud.com/terrestrialcouncil/stars-connect-civilizations

I composed this track last year in November, it's track 6 of a 7 track series and while I'm not going to release it as an album I'm working on a video for the entire EP (it's 16 mins long) that I'll post here when it's done!

I'm not completely finished the mixing of this track (haven't touched it since November actually), so yeah any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks for listening I hope you enjoy! =)

This works pretty well for the style of track it is, straight ahead chiptune-esque electronica, the synths themselves sound

nice and warm and in terms of mixing, pretty much in the forefront. If I was to say anything, perhaps bring out the beat a bit more or make it sharper, it feels a little lost and there's not much variation in the beat either. Not so much of a problem for such a short track but even adding a few fills or a break might make the difference.

  On 5/23/2011 at 5:09 AM, Dissolvedpaul said:

This works pretty well for the style of track it is, straight ahead chiptune-esque electronica, the synths themselves sound

nice and warm and in terms of mixing, pretty much in the forefront. If I was to say anything, perhaps bring out the beat a bit more or make it sharper, it feels a little lost and there's not much variation in the beat either. Not so much of a problem for such a short track but even adding a few fills or a break might make the difference.

Cool thanks for listening and the feedback! You reassured me about the mix because that was the main part I wanted feedback on, so thanks! And yeah I actually want to redo a lot of the drums for the entire 16 minute piece, since I composed it I've completely rediscovered making drum beats so it'll be exciting to finish it off. =)