junkie mirror

http://soundcloud.com/tht-tne/junkie-mirror

actually soliciting criticism on this one, not just sharing

I think this song needs desperately to have more layers. I also feel as if the song was too long. I am not really a fan of long songs if they do not durasticly progress or have some kind of hook to come back too. Like in jazz music songs can be ten minutes long with lots of experimental meandering but the best jazz always comes back to a memorable hook or "head". If you run out of idea's it's o.k to cut a song short. Look at producers like prefuse73 whose songs are only a minute long alot of the time but packed with textures and idea's. I like the track it just doesn't feel memorable as of right now.