A HYPE-UP FLIGHT MUZAK SYSTEM

http://soundcloud.com/nevenen/a-hype-up-flight-muzak-system

i am trying to get signed to planet mu

You should try using only the samples that are included in FL studio and 808 except for the vocals. There's definetly not enough 808 here. Also loop this so it would be around 3 minutes long. Also don't use reverb, it sounds too good. Other than that it's very good. Keep it up and you'll get signed.