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work in prog, need some advice/crit!

I like the combination of the floaty, atmospheric pads and acid-esque elements. Nice job. It could perhaps use a bit more variation, especially on the bassline.

  On 7/19/2011 at 4:25 PM, Jonas said:

the minimal structure works, but wouldn't mind more variation.

yeah i def agree, that's in the works, more variation. thanks for checking it out!

  On 7/19/2011 at 1:19 PM, Hasselbalch said:

I like the combination of the floaty, atmospheric pads and acid-esque elements. Nice job. It could perhaps use a bit more variation, especially on the bassline.

cool cool, thanks! yeah this is a rough mix, i was thinking of either key change or something unexpected...i'll see what comes up.

i thought it sounded fine. you could add more variation but then you run the risk of sounding like youre trying too hard. it was a nice chill track and i think the lack of variation actually supported that

  On 7/19/2011 at 5:50 PM, hardcode said:

i thought it sounded fine. you could add more variation but then you run the risk of sounding like youre trying too hard. it was a nice chill track and i think the lack of variation actually supported that

i will keep that in mind .... thanks for listening!