unfinished awkward track needs feedback

any feedback appreciated

mm liked it. guess more bits would be good.

the waveform LOOKS awkward, playing now...

it doesn't make sense to cut the synths only to put them back in just a coupla bars later, there should be a bigger change imo, or the track might go to some other place before going back to the original theme, dunno.

i like it lots when the melody comes @ about 1:40 or something, really like the mood of the track, and i usually dislike repetitive tracks but this one is seductively hypnotic :)

edit: by the way you should let us enjoy that bit for a longer time, once the final melody enters, and why not tweak some knobs or something to keep the track evolving.