a one minute thing

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hello

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Nice, kinda BoC meets BMSR

Yeah this is good, I would never have the balls to put kids laughing in there. I would do as much as I could to give it a more unique non-BOC vibe.

Thanks people. Never heard of black moth super rainbow until today these guys are neat. The kids laughing will probably go away someday its pretty tacky. I dont hear the boc parts in it for some reason, if i find them i might change those too

The drum patterns and production are like digital BOC, the atmosphere is very BOC, the melodies speed is not very BOC. That is all well in good, I would just throw in things that you haven't heard before in that context. Take out the children laughing first of all. Put in sounds/instruments you don't usually hear on electronic music. Ever heard a harp, stretched out slow swooning girl vocal melodies like pads, a real acoustic natural sounding percussion, super digital thugged out futuristic NI Razor like bass, heavily bit crushed bass drums and snares etc. etc. etc. on many BOC tracks? Neither have I, try stuff like that out, etc. Create your signature combination of elements and vibes.

Composing a great song is half the battle. The other half of the battle is creating a unique aesthetic that sounds so necessary and new that people want to dive into it like it's a new unexplored beautiful planet. Easier said than done in this day in age but I believe it's pretty important. Still trying to find my niche with some of my projects.