any advice is welcome :D

http://soundcloud.com/ex-voto/legal-eagle

worked on it a bit more, dunno if I like the changes though

I really like it,especially middle part and outtro.Great creativity and sound.

Maybe intro is to harsh(to much hi tones?) but I think it's more of a personal preferences.

Overall I really like this kind of music and it was pleasure to hear this track.

i liked the middle part less. overall i loved the sound and atmosphere. what did u use to make this?

Thanks! I use the fm8 mostly yan_g. What do you guys use?

heey I love that. the vibe is really original. I also find it has a little Plaid something.

The noise sound at the beginning is awesome but listening to it with my headphones, I think it lacks of space (reverb, delay?...). I hadn't that impression for the two other parts because then we clearly understand this noise comes from the bass synth. at least that's what I heard.

anyway, i'm gonna follow you on soundcloud because I'd love to hear other stuff like that :)

Hey antape! Thanks man :D

Hmm good critic on the beginning, actually I started the whole jam with that part, and then I thought hmm it is a bit too obscure. I wanted to make something with a bit more drive. I could layer it and add some reeverb and maybe delay to some of them.

I haven't had time to listen to your tracks, but I noticed you started following me. Will listen asap ":)

Greets!

amazing texture. i don't know if you'd be willing to do this, but maybe you should at least have a remix of this track with some heavy percussion [that's just my taste, though]. if you don't wanna, you should let me do it! good work

the part at 0:55 is amazing. i wish it would just continue from that and build. and you don't even need the chord progression in my opinion. just that one bass sounds great. you could add stuff on top. it is a bit harsh but that sets it apart as well.

hey guys thanks :)

@xkudzu go ahead man I am interested in what you will make of it :D

@ sheatheman

thanks man, might pick it up again and fuck around with it in a new save file :)

  On 10/22/2011 at 10:56 AM, ex-voto said:

hey guys thanks :)

@xkudzu go ahead man I am interested in what you will make of it :D

@ sheatheman

thanks man, might pick it up again and fuck around with it in a new save file :)

yeah do it if you can. it can be pretty hard to get started on a cold track though.