New 747Music song

did this song with my newly acquired AKAI MPK mini. It's a cool little 2 octave keyboard with sample pads and knobs.

Anyways, listen to the song. Hope you enjoy.

http://soundcloud.com/747music-1/747music-the-first

has a kind of retro sci-fi feel to it. I like the bass a lot. nice breakbeat.

cheers dude!

I love the 2/3 of it ! But I don't like the end so much (@1:50)

Also, the mix sounds really quiet but it could be a choice. Is it ?

  On 10/26/2011 at 12:52 AM, Antape said:

I love the 2/3 of it ! But I don't like the end so much (@1:50)

 

Also, the mix sounds really quiet but it could be a choice. Is it ?

Thanks for listening.

I used my Corsair HS1 headphones which are very loud,and was on a loud setting when I made it. So yeah, it may be too quiet. Should I remaster? Is it that bad?

Not that it's bad, I was actually wondering if it was meant to be so quiet, if you wanted the listener to hear it on a low volume. Which really makes sense with that track IMO because it sounds mysterious, like it's coming from a far place.

That said if you want it to sound "regular" in loudness yes I think it's pretty quiet. Seeing the waveform of the track, the peaks that corresponds to the bass notes are much louder than the average level of the waveform, but this level difference is not perceptible with the ear (at least I don't feel it ; my monitors + headphones are weak in bass :/). So I think your bass may have some really low frequencies that makes it loud in term of level, but not in term of what you hear. I don't know what I just wrote is clear?

The atmosphere is really good anyway. I'm listening to it once more and the end bothers me way less than the previous time. I remember I didn't really get caught by that second melody of the bass (1:50) but it's ok now :P a matter of mood I suppose

Like the idea of the track. A little too repetitive with not alot of melody. Keep working on your device though as naturally you will start to flourish. Loving the break. And yes remaster it. It is way too soft. Needs to be more of a progression in my opinion.