sergeantk Posted November 30, 2011 Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 So yeah,,, this is actually the first full electronic track I've made on my own (years of playing an instrument though so I'm not a music noob though haha) Any and all advice will help. http://soundcloud.com/shangrilost/cruisin Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sergeantk's signature Hide all signatures My music (zanderone) Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/70227-ambient-techno-track-i-made/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
robotrobot Posted November 30, 2011 Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 seems to have a lot of high freq white noise in the beginning that returns around 0:41. The snare might be a little dry, feels like it needs a little snap maybe eq. I love the classy loungy chords. They melodic keyboard you use sounds a little dry in that maybe it can be made to flow better with some type of effect kind of the nice reverby sound on the blinky synth that stabs in around 1:52, maybe something like that would work for the key lead. All in all very creative direction. I like. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide robotrobot's signature Hide all signatures http://soundcloud.com/sjsfc/honeyknocker-meadowshttp://soundcloud.com/sjsfc/origami-repetika-daphne-dumpling http://txti.es/a220 Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/70227-ambient-techno-track-i-made/#findComment-1702467 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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