"enjoy tornado"

http://soundcloud.com/sotis/enjoy-tornado

it's a pretty chill song. i've been listening to calmer hip hop beats lately. please tell me what you think.

I really like the beats & general atmosphere, but it felt like it needed some sort of melodic line & maybe the two distinct sections should have intercepted with each other.

yeah, i agree, i should work on some bridge-like shorter parts to tie stuff together. thanks for the feedback mate.

so here's the second version: http://soundcloud.com/sotis/you-know-im-not

there is now a main melody to tie everything together, but the mixing isn't that great and there's a short part that starts at 02:00 that's really uninspired