fluffy bunnies?

Hey ya'll. Been lurking around these parts for a few months now and i've been wanting to post something. i've been working on this light little tune and i wanted to get a bit of feedback on it. I'ma still working on the structure, probably going to expand the middle bit.

Thanks for the listen!

http://soundcloud.com/teng40z/evening-tune

That was really great. Keep'em coming.

sounds friendly, it is nice to meet you

protip: stare at the smiley in his post while listening

What immediately strikes me is the clarity of the sounds. Nice choice of sounds and very well mixed I would say. I also like the playful composition rather much. However, (maybe because it is rather short) I sort of miss the sense of going on a journey in the song, with a clear beginning, middle and end. Maybe you can add this sense of journey by introducing additional instruments on the way that pick up on the theme. This would also provide the listener with some anchor points that help to discern the different parts in the structure of the song (which I think is quite difficult now). I think you can easily do this without compromising the 'lightness' of the tune.

Here is another tune:

https://soundcloud.com/teng40z/somemachinesinavalley

Kind of a jammy thing

liked and followed

evening tune - wow, really interesting...indeed nice clarity...maybe i would only open filter on that bass a little bit...its in high contrast to those clear sounds above...but musically it is awesome!

very nice. maybe it was your intention, but it sounds very small so i might try some haas effect or reverb or some kind of spreading on a few elements to give it some more size.

i actually really enjoyed it.. nice mixing, beutiful sounds