Eat glass and detune

niiiiice mood - very detuned and creepy in a good way. maybe you should work a bit more on dynamics, some breakdowns and more intesive parts because right now it is a little flat. but other than this - I enjoyed it :)

I have an idea for the bit around the end you may like, if you're interested.

I agree with Dpek. I like it, but it doesn't really grab my attention anywhere. Keep up the good work!

love the first 40 seconds, the melody is too simple for me but i love the sounds. overall it doesn't sound like it's really going anywhere.