Moso - Mrs Jynx

This track was started a couple of months ago. Its not seen the light of day for a while and i think i should finish it. Ideas would be welcomed!!

Moso

:)

usual good melodies/synths. i prefer the electronic drums in the tracks i've heard of yours, compared to this breaky beat. i think it'd sound better loud, but i've lost my headphone adapter so i have to listen at low volume. at this volume the click sound seems too loud, but that might just be my shit hifi.

2nd time now I've heard this and it does have a certain charm. I can kinda understand why you were reluctant to post it though. Its not bad but dunno seems to be lacking something. It didn't hit me like wham the first time and its taken me a few listens to sort of 'get it'. I have to disagree with Tauboo about the drums though; I think drums work nicely and give the track extra pep.

I think the main problem with this track is that the melodies/harmonies felt a bit fussy and hard to get into. Has a certain big screen, boc, epic feel though. Yeah its not bad but not my favourite of yours.

My overall feeling was it was listenable but it took time to get 'it'. I think more layers could be added and even some sort of solo section. Not keen on the bleepy percussion sound - don't think it added much. The break seemed to fade as the tune progressed - you need to keep it prominent through the track. My view is try and gear your thinking towards emotional crescendo in relation to this piece ... you know taking onwards and upwards as it progresses. For me personally it just seemed to go a little stale after a few minutes.

the main melody is so fantastic after many plays. gets better every time i turn this one on. i think the beat is so appropriate and fits perfectly. the change up in melody @ 2:00 maybe needs a little more working out. otherwise this track encompasses everything i love about your music.

i cant stress enough how much i love the main melody.

Wowza.

fucking hell this, song is very very very very very very very nice

(non drunkx edit)

agreed, you've got an obvious talent for tasteful and imaginative harmonies

wow, pretty melody

Thats a great melody, especially the lead. Nice breakdown after 2 mins, yeah i like this lots

My original interpretation of this was a bit wrong so I had to bump this track up to correct that. I heard it last night and then just suddenly got it! Some of the levels are still too loud but I think my head just wasn't in the right mood when I heard it the first time. Peace.

this was a nice track... very pleasant melodies. it just doesn't really seem to go anywhere or do anything too exciting, but i don't think that was your intention. would make nice background music