sun or die

hello everybody

Long time no posting, but here is one of my newest works.

download: http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=161FV5P...DJ21MDS6ZE0OR0T

So, i really like to hear c&c from you cause it really helps me in this all music making (;

thank you

pads were way too loud

drums not loud enough

drums good be programmed in greater detail

i like the vibe overall -textural and ambient

this is a good first draft,the melodys and dynamic shifts are ok,but overall it

needs more work