Bird's Eye View

http://soundcloud.com/747music-1/747music-birds-eye-view

anyone like? I would appreciate any input.

I like it myself. Not sure what you were going for but I like the haziness and the way the noises are phasing, but somewhere towards 3/4 of the way I would have liked to see an additional melody/pad or perhaps a low vol sequence of blips.. but that's just personal taste I guess.

good work man keep it up.

around 2 mins I mean I would have dropped another layer into the melody

  On 2/20/2012 at 9:48 PM, StephenG said:

I like it myself. Not sure what you were going for but I like the haziness and the way the noises are phasing, but somewhere towards 3/4 of the way I would have liked to see an additional melody/pad or perhaps a low vol sequence of blips.. but that's just personal taste I guess.

 

good work man keep it up.

 

around 2 mins I mean I would have dropped another layer into the melody

thanks for the comment. I'll play around with it some more and yeah, maybe add another layer or two. Thanks again.

I've got some more things going on in the song in my DAW. I'll render the final mix after I get my APC40 in the mail later this week, hopefully tomorrow. there is just too much going on to keep track of it with my mouse. stay tuned.

  On 2/20/2012 at 10:43 PM, 747Music said:

I've got some more things going on in the song in my DAW. I'll render the final mix after I get my APC40 in the mail later this week, hopefully tomorrow. there is just too much going on to keep track of it with my mouse. stay tuned.

Sounds great! Looking forward to it.

It sounds similar to something I made a few years back in reason, but yours is much better. Still gives me a nostalgic feeling, I like that.