The song about you

a little playful melody..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.c...&songID=3801630

kinda stock ,the sounds are a bit general midi

the main pianoo arp does not grab me

it sounds like music for denise austin's aerobics tv show until the end when it starts to get a little weird

funk that shit up and twist it

right now it s not grabbing my attention

Kinda agree with Quayczar (aka L13) too. I'm not a major fan of white key playskool melodies. Twas kinda okay. A bit Aphex cutesy style melodies but I like harmonies with a bit more of an edge. I think you can do better.

Thanks for the comments guys!

white keys? check up the neopolitan minor. made in the same scale as avril 14th

The intention was to make a bit of a childish playful tune. i was feeling like that at the time and it felt like a good break away from my regular rather sad tunes.

i have kind of a problem with making anything that's not about how i feel when i make it.

it's getting rather good feedback at soundclick so I dunno. i personally don't really like it except for the melodical ideas which i kind of tend to focus on leaving out sound and effects/mastering etc.

i'm working on some more processed glitchy things a lá drukqs, will be fun to hear what you think when they're done.