Suncloud

http://soundcloud.com/zanderone/suncloud

As usual, any comments/criticism welcome

lacks originality for me

I think this is very nice,

Only criticism would be the synthy arpeggio riff that comes in at around 3:00 sounds a bit sudden.. Would probably sound nicer faded in or something like that.

Oh and the end was too abrupt for me too.

  On 3/11/2012 at 12:55 PM, Hermann said:

the synthy arpeggio riff that comes in at around 3:00 sounds a bit sudden.. Would probably sound nicer faded in or something like that.

Oh and the end was too abrupt for me too.

^This!

Also, the kick might be a biiiiiiit too deep.

I didn't think the synthy arpeggio riff came in sudden, but it's loud compared to the other parts..

  On 3/11/2012 at 12:26 PM, yanG said:

lacks originality for me

I could only say I haven't really found "my sound" yet. But, I understand where you're coming from.

  On 3/11/2012 at 12:55 PM, Hermann said:

I think this is very nice,

Only criticism would be the synthy arpeggio riff that comes in at around 3:00 sounds a bit sudden.. Would probably sound nicer faded in or something like that.

Oh and the end was too abrupt for me too.

Thank you.

It's less sudden in my ears only because I already KNEW it was gonna come in there, so I'll take it into consideration.

  On 3/11/2012 at 9:10 PM, Squee said:

  On 3/11/2012 at 12:55 PM, Hermann said:

the synthy arpeggio riff that comes in at around 3:00 sounds a bit sudden.. Would probably sound nicer faded in or something like that.

Oh and the end was too abrupt for me too.

 

^This!

Also, the kick might be a biiiiiiit too deep.

That was one of the harder things to mix, i feel.

  On 3/11/2012 at 10:19 PM, missingsense said:

I didn't think the synthy arpeggio riff came in sudden, but it's loud compared to the other parts..

It is loud, I intended it to be.. Maybe too loud though

Thanks for the comments guys.

Very nice. My only problem is that the beginning lead is so nice, I wish it would carry on a little longer into the body of the tune

really nice tune