"The Gift"

'Nother work in progress:

http://soundcloud.com/the-yfc/oooaaww/s-QaFzG

Hmm. Sounds pretty good, but a bit too conventional. Like something that would be background music. You got some nice hip hop beats and synths going on, and good compression, but you need something to make it stand out. I don't like the guitar much. Maybe try doing some Actress style stuff to it, granulate and bit crush stuff a bit, put it through a filter or two.