Probbably my best song so far.

Worked hard on this one, I hope you like it. Please, leave your critics on this track, good or negative.

http://soundcloud.com/sergej-sokolov/borealis

the intro was a bit too drawn out but once the melodies come in, pretty!!!!

maybe get some 80s out Slowdive reverb drums floating throughout to increase the "presence" of the track?

I like it!

  On 4/14/2012 at 2:19 PM, Smettingham Rutherford IV said:

the intro was a bit too drawn out but once the melodies come in, pretty!!!!

 

maybe get some 80s out Slowdive reverb drums floating throughout to increase the "presence" of the track?

 

 

I like it!

Thanks alot! And about the Slowdive drums, I had this jazz like loop in my PC so I edited it and put it there. And about the reverb, it's on all of the instruments, normally there is no reverb on any of those.

once it sets after the break around 4th minute thorugh it's really good. you're getting there, champ.

Seconding that the build-up might of been too long. Once everything is finally layered on at the end it gets really good.

  On 4/14/2012 at 2:26 PM, kinski said:

once it sets after the break around 4th minute thorugh it's really good. you're getting there, champ.

I'm trying! :)

Thanks!

  On 4/14/2012 at 2:27 PM, Cryptowen said:

Seconding that the build-up might of been too long. Once everything is finally layered on at the end it gets really good.

Yeah, I could have fix some things. Thanks!

You're definitely getting better. Keep at it.

i don´t agree with the intro being too drawn out, in my opinion I think it works well as an ominous and fluent introduction.

Just my opinion ;)

And wow when those bottley natural sounds come in, it´s fantastic!

Good job

  On 4/14/2012 at 8:09 PM, Hermann said:

i don´t agree with the intro being too drawn out, in my opinion I think it works well as an ominous and fluent introduction.

Just my opinion ;)

 

And wow when those bottley natural sounds come in, it´s fantastic!

Good job

  On 4/14/2012 at 4:46 PM, Bewarethefriendlyfoil said:

You're definitely getting better. Keep at it.

THANK YOU ALL!! Didn't expect much good feedbacks! Thank you!