Wavy (demo)

let me know what you gurus think

my friend said it sounds like "something i would expect to see in a runway video, not something id want to listen to". so far, not good

A 'Runaway vid'? That's a ridiculous association... I like the 'grainy pad over the dub' idea so it is strong conceptually; the bass line is great on this.

Not all the synth voicings are to my liking; specifically the plinky-plonky ascending/descending scale voicing. The 'Alarm' dub SFX could be mixed down a tad.

ah thx for the feedback dude! everything's definitely a bit unmixed, so the generic airhorns and 8-bit laser sounds can be dropped down a bit lol. i'll see what i come up with regarding revised sounds for the plinky-plonky voicing starting at 1:00 or so. thanks again.

nice. i like the effects and the chill drum pattern