Stone Circle

This is a track I was working on for an upcoming album, but I'm not sure it will wind up on it.

http://soundcloud.com/faceculler/stone-circle

Vocals by my wife.

Any mixing ideas or constructive criticism welcome.

What a magical summer track you made, great job FC!

Thank you sir! The response on soundcloud has made me think it probably belongs on the album.

Probably needs a bit more bass...

fun track

couldve used a bit more nuances though, everything is pretty much in the foreground i feel

those squeeky bleep bloop thingys that come in at 0:53 (and become very apparent at 1:00) in for example could be a bit more silent just a bit i think, same with drums at 2:50, etc

well im checking the track on low price range sennheiser headphones so u know, maybe it stomps everything hi-midrange a bit more to the front...

Really nice! Well done.

Thanks for the feedback! I agree about stuff being too far in the foreground, I'll play with the mixing a bit more...

It is a very nice and catchy, and very sunny, track, but I feel it doesn´t flow that well for me. It feels a bit too much like they are just different parts put together, I mean I can feel each part seperately and can´t hear it much as a whole piece. If you get what I´m saying.

I just feel it´s missing one thing (what it is I´m not sure though) that ties it all together.

Other than that nice track ;)

Cheers Hermann, thanks for the feedback. The transition to the darker section makes sense in my head but I can see how it could feel disjointed. I always like having more than one mood or feeling in a track, but sometimes they don't fit snugly enough.

i agree with what herrman wrote and like this track. I'll have to check out more of tracks on soundcloud someday.