A track I made in a couple of hours

http://soundcloud.com/autistichildren/animanoir

since my computer is shit I can't really put a lot of stuff in there, but what you think?

I like it, it has a lot of potential. The fuzz in the background is too persistent in my opinion. Lower the volume on that a bit and let it fade out or something, for a little while atleast, to make room for the stuff that comes in at around 1:00 because that stuff sounds really great but its getting covered up. What could sound really nice is keep the fuzz persistent then drop it out all together right as that stuff comes in with one of those bass hits. It will sound like you're floating.