piano bit

firstJam194.mp3

not bad, sounds a bit thomas newman/ saw 2

theme needs some variation, maybe try inverting it or putting it in a different register at times

the sustained C of the synth also clashes with the C# on the piano, i assume it's deliberate but at some points it doesn't sound all that good.

i like this a lot daz. nice background synth sound which complements the piano work and gives it a base to bounce along off. again though, i couldnt help but hear beats and drummery that could complement the riffs.

cheers for posting, another nice wee snippet to add to the NC16 folder.

i think the clashing notes are great! Does sound very Thomas Newman, yes. I like this a lot!

what they said

Ah yes, more of the jams!

Really like this piece. The subtle development and variations are fine by me. I don't think it needs anything drastic. The pulsing chord conflict doesn't bother me either.

Very cool sir.

Thanks for sharing!

Peace