pebble

still a snippet above all else i suppose

I think the drums may be a little loud. Particularly that snare with the clap. Really nice pads though, and I like the groove of the drums

I like this. All good ideas. It doesn't feel glued together to me. Maybe that's not the point but I feel like this would sit really nicely with some sidechaining in key areas & a little more detuning for a nice dreamy feel. Also, one nitpicking suggestion: use a snare with a quicker decay 75% of the time so the one you have stands out more. Nice sound.