anonymstol Posted August 27, 2012 Report Share Posted August 27, 2012 http://soundcloud.com/zylomafoni/fluttershys-so-chill it may sound like it, but i didn't sample anything and everything's made with vsti's Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/75407-made-a-track-without-chip-sounds/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
anonymstol Posted August 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2012 shit just read the read before starting a new thread thing. i feel so ashamed and narcissistic. gonna start commenting on people right away. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/75407-made-a-track-without-chip-sounds/#findComment-1869888 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeantk Posted August 27, 2012 Report Share Posted August 27, 2012 On 8/27/2012 at 8:33 PM, anonymstol said: shit just read the read before starting a new thread thing. i feel so ashamed and narcissistic. gonna start commenting on people right away. you shouldn't - at least you're making an effort unlike some spammers (of whom i should not name) Anyways nice track. I like the gated synth and the ping pong on the square lead. Maybe the only criticism is a bit of repetiveness, and the square lead might be a bit too loud/contrasting. but overall I love the chords and the four to the floor kick. Nice snare too. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sergeantk's signature Hide all signatures My music (zanderone) Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/75407-made-a-track-without-chip-sounds/#findComment-1869975 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendly Foil Posted August 27, 2012 Report Share Posted August 27, 2012 This is so much better. I especially like the first 30 seconds. the transition to that gated stuff is a bit abrupt, but it kinda works. The white noise thing that starts playing at the 0:45 mark is weird. It fits, but it seems like the sustain/release is a tad too long. As it is now, it takes up a lot of 'space', if that makes any sense. I don't know. Other than that, I don't really have much else to whine about. I like this sound a lot more than your Nintendo stuff. It's way more personal, and showcases your sense of melody a lot better. 'quite good' Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/75407-made-a-track-without-chip-sounds/#findComment-1869982 Share on other sites More sharing options...
dls Posted August 27, 2012 Report Share Posted August 27, 2012 I like it. Maybe i'll be back to listen again. Criticsm though, i think the intro is the best part, but i don't really like that stabby fuzzy sounding synth. At least it wasn't acid Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/75407-made-a-track-without-chip-sounds/#findComment-1869983 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cryptowen Posted August 28, 2012 Report Share Posted August 28, 2012 Like others have said the transition early on is rather abrupt. I think if t'were me I'd have started right at 0:29 & then incorporated elements of the opening into one of the breakdowns. It also feels rather meandering towards the end but other than that good jorb Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Cryptowen's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/75407-made-a-track-without-chip-sounds/#findComment-1870014 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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