Guest Hermann Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 Just finished this piece today, give it a listen if you feel like it :-) Constructive criticisms are always welcome, but bare in mind it´s finished and won´t change. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76076-above-and-beyond-the-water/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 Really nice one. I like how it's progressive and how the differents parts come one after the other. I'll listen to it again on better speakers. (oh and by the way I just finished to work on Bilif, check you soundcoud pm later ;) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Lucas's signature Hide all signatures antape @ soundcloud Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76076-above-and-beyond-the-water/#findComment-1890680 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aefx Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 Loving the melody in second part and pads (are they synthesized?). First three minutes sounds a bit long due to absence of melodic content IMO but sounds very nice, especially metallic percussion sounds, which reminded I Care Because You Do ones. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Aefx's signature Hide all signatures https://soundcloud.com/sonornote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76076-above-and-beyond-the-water/#findComment-1890715 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hermann Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 Thanks guys :) Those pads, well... No they´re not synthesized per say. Maybe I just shouldn´t tell you and it would keep the mystery of them ;) No but seriously, they were created through a long process of editting and fucking things up as much as possible! I guess I was just having too much fun with those percussions in the first half yeah. But I made the second half significantly long enough I think to balance it out. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76076-above-and-beyond-the-water/#findComment-1890719 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 i think the intro takes too long. the drums alone don't really catch my attention. but once the pad kicks in that all changes. really cool song. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76076-above-and-beyond-the-water/#findComment-1890757 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 Lots of nice details and lots of variation. Goodie! The cymbal during the first part gets a bit too much but apart from that I don't really have anything to complain about :) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76076-above-and-beyond-the-water/#findComment-1890773 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest drakmin Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 Reminds me of Future Sound Of London, take this as a compliment! I like your snare/clap, somehow it manages to be nicely separated yet belogs into mix with all it's variations. I liked 1:50 the best and 2:50 the weakest until it's combined with 3:30 melody. (though in this song even the weak is rather good ;]) 3:30 lead sound is awesome but the melody itself might be better if simplified just slightly. Steady kick drives song forward nicely and I was not bored. Maybe some hard distortions in percussion might have fitted on some areas of the song to add even more variation. Good track! Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76076-above-and-beyond-the-water/#findComment-1890878 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest A/D Posted October 17, 2012 Report Share Posted October 17, 2012 I really liked it by the end. Nice percussion & good progression. I echo the ADD complaints that it takes too long to get there. Solid work though! Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76076-above-and-beyond-the-water/#findComment-1891470 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hermann Posted October 17, 2012 Report Share Posted October 17, 2012 Thanks a lot people, I appreciate the feedback! :) Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76076-above-and-beyond-the-water/#findComment-1891563 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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