cheese and more!

just some hours old, if you have not read one of my other threads.

I'm experimenting / getting experience, not aiming for release or anything & all critics are welcome

http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/mag

kinda cool. needs a bit of work though. biggest thing that comes to mind is that you have a lot of sounds competing for the front. making it hard to hear everything together. especially since all the sounds are bouncy. so work a bit on the dynamics. it will help the track a lot.

good point with the dynamics thats pretty true, I often lack on composition,

atm I'm already happy when I come up with something that sounds decent at one point.

thx for listening to everyone

I did this one yesterday

http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/t-godkilla

I know that I wanted to change the end a bit and the breakup of the sounds in the middle,

but atm I can't remember...

It's the very first "take", maybe I should play with automations/ change the ending,

I think it works better with headphones dunno.

sorry this is nothing new, I just found the first and the secound 'track' I've created. I don't think the date is right because it says march 2011... I have to check that. I didn't really get better at this shit lol.

2nd:

http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/wierdowalk-23-secound

1st

http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/untilted-first

done yesterday 9:36 make it my longest 'track' yet,

I even gave it a name lol HYPE!!

Finally homeless

http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/finally-homeless

some nice noises. maybe try and mix it up a bit more in my opinion. keep at it!

  On 10/17/2012 at 10:52 AM, randomAmateur said:

just some hours old, if you have not read one of my other threads.

I'm experimenting / getting experience, not aiming for release or anything & all critics are welcome

 

 

I love the part that comes in at around 1 minute. It's like the still functioning terminal room of an abandoned space station.

listening to the 9minute one now

your stuff is soundtracky, reminiscent of lost 80's scifi scores. while it may be compositionally lacking, the textures do well to conjure up imagery, which can't always be said about a snappy verse chorus verse chorus.