sheatheman Posted October 25, 2012 Report Share Posted October 25, 2012 http://soundcloud.com/shea-mcgilvray/hogozu-sector this is another good one. i'm on a rolllllll Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76238-hogozu-sector/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeantk Posted October 26, 2012 Report Share Posted October 26, 2012 really cool track. very chilled out. my criticism is that I don't really like the sound of the bass, it kinda sounds really thin on my headphones. However i quite enjoyed the chord progressions synths melodies etc. Great production! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sergeantk's signature Hide all signatures My music (zanderone) Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76238-hogozu-sector/#findComment-1895418 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sheatheman Posted October 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2012 thanks for lisnin. that's really weird man, you probably have $200 headphones or something, I don't know. The bass sounds too beefy on every set of speaker's i've listened on. i worked on it with headphones. it does taper out during the second section because i am just tuning the clips of bass down in ableton. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76238-hogozu-sector/#findComment-1895464 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jchgf Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 There are very interesting things that happen in the 2/3 part of the track where the beat seems to back down, hesitate and break up a little. But I couldn't get behind the chord progression in the first part, 1/4 of the chords seemed too random and aimless and bogged down the rest of the progression, though the other 3/4 was very solid and sounded great. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76238-hogozu-sector/#findComment-1896030 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sheatheman Posted October 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 i'm confused by your fractions. the beginning is kind of a joke. I agree, the track doesn't start until the latter 3/4 (2/3?) That's where I'm actually doing something. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76238-hogozu-sector/#findComment-1896201 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeantk Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 Maybe the problem i'm hearing on the bass is some high frequencies that are in it? On second listen it seems a bit grainy. Like there are frequencies that are diluting the overall sound. Maybe try an LPF? Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sergeantk's signature Hide all signatures My music (zanderone) Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76238-hogozu-sector/#findComment-1896218 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sheatheman Posted October 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 On 10/27/2012 at 8:45 PM, sergeantk said: Maybe the problem i'm hearing on the bass is some high frequencies that are in it? On second listen it seems a bit grainy. Like there are frequencies that are diluting the overall sound. Maybe try an LPF? man you know you do have a point, it's not quite as punchy as i would like it to be on my headphones right now. the high end grain is purposeful, but the way the mix was, i couldn't quite get the bass powerful enough without peaking, so the grain might be too prevalent. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76238-hogozu-sector/#findComment-1896228 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted October 28, 2012 Report Share Posted October 28, 2012 The bass sounds fine. Perfect actually. Especially the bass at the 1:32 mark. I'm not a big fan of the sound of the chord. It sounds a bit too soft-synth-like. Try distorting it ever so slightly, add some reverb to that, and add a low pass filter to it - and maybe add another reverb after that on a bus/aux channel :) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76238-hogozu-sector/#findComment-1896400 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sheatheman Posted October 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2012 which chord squee? Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/76238-hogozu-sector/#findComment-1896515 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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