Something new - very unfinished ...

Friday evening, starting something fresh:

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon/s-2EeRE

There's a nice icy warmth to this track, very nice chords at 1.11 too.

sweet. i love it when the synth kicks in with that rhythm. only thing id say is this needs a melody on top of that rhythm. then you'd have something really cool.

  On 11/9/2012 at 7:52 PM, rev85 said:

There's a nice icy warmth to this track, very nice chords at 1.11 too.

Cheers, will continue to add to it as usual :-)

  On 11/9/2012 at 9:53 PM, Frankie5fingers said:

sweet. i love it when the synth kicks in with that rhythm. only thing id say is this needs a melody on top of that rhythm. then you'd have something really cool.

Will keep that in mind! Will continue.

Wonderful!

  On 11/9/2012 at 9:53 PM, Frankie5fingers said:

sweet. i love it when the synth kicks in with that rhythm. only thing id say is this needs a melody on top of that rhythm. then you'd have something really cool.

Thanks a lot! Your input is much appreciated.

Just updated this, check it out:

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon/s-2EeRE

The melody that pops in at 2:38 is great! Really great. Eerie and beautiful. The glitchy cymbal thingie is a bit too loud though or maybe just a bit too dominant since it's a very powerful sound. I would probably cut the intro down a bit as well.

But this is great! I really like it

damn, this sounds sweet!

Great stuff!

I agree with squee that you could cut down the intro droning a bit in length. In my opinion, a long droney intro can work well if it is gradually integrated into the main part of the piece, but it feels a bit too seperate from the rest of it to me. It is a lovely intro but yeah just the way it´s structured with the rest of the track kind of bothers me.

Other than that I have no more issues, I´m loving everything behind this. Good job!

  On 11/12/2012 at 11:27 PM, Hermann said:

Gradually integrate the long droney intro into the main part of the piece,

Other than that, everything is perfect!

  On 11/12/2012 at 7:34 PM, Squee said:

The melody that pops in at 2:38 is great! Really great. Eerie and beautiful. The glitchy cymbal thingie is a bit too loud though or maybe just a bit too dominant since it's a very powerful sound. I would probably cut the intro down a bit as well.

But this is great! I really like it

Thanks Squee for the constructive input!

  On 11/12/2012 at 7:34 PM, Squee said:

The melody that pops in at 2:38 is great! Really great. Eerie and beautiful. The glitchy cymbal thingie is a bit too loud though or maybe just a bit too dominant since it's a very powerful sound. I would probably cut the intro down a bit as well.

But this is great! I really like it

  On 11/12/2012 at 11:27 PM, Hermann said:

Great stuff!

 

I agree with squee that you could cut down the intro droning a bit in length. In my opinion, a long droney intro can work well if it is gradually integrated into the main part of the piece, but it feels a bit too seperate from the rest of it to me. It is a lovely intro but yeah just the way it´s structured with the rest of the track kind of bothers me.

 

Other than that I have no more issues, I´m loving everything behind this. Good job!

Squee, Hermann et al; this is the latest version; have a listen!

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon/s-2EeRE

  On 11/13/2012 at 12:35 PM, encym said:

 

Squee, Hermann et al; this is the latest version; have a listen!

 

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon/s-2EeRE

Lovely stuff!!! It didn´t have that guitar there in the intro before did it?

  On 11/13/2012 at 3:19 PM, Hermann said:

  On 11/13/2012 at 12:35 PM, encym said:

Squee, Hermann et al; this is the latest version; have a listen!

 

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon/s-2EeRE

 

Lovely stuff!!! It didn´t have that guitar there in the intro before did it?

I think it did but the intro was longer and perhaps the guitar more buried in the mix.

there we go, intro is right on the money now. it sounds like a Omar Rodriguez and ae collab with the guitar.

New link:

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon

Veeery nice, man. Kinda wish the beat was a bit louder though. Especially the snare because I love how dry it is. Makes me nod my head.

i agree with squee, turn up the beat.

this is great work dude.

  On 11/13/2012 at 11:21 PM, Squee said:

Veeery nice, man. Kinda wish the beat was a bit louder though. Especially the snare because I love how dry it is. Makes me nod my head.

Thanks mate, you guys are inspiring. Thanks for taking the time to listen.

Now it gets to the difficult stage though, as some people suggest to keep the drums down while others want to hear more of them :-)

Maybe just the snare then?

  On 11/13/2012 at 9:43 PM, encym said:

New link:

 

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon

wow, this is really fantastic work. love the panning at the start. i wasn't expecting the gated part at 0:33 but it all works so well together! the drums sound good to me, though as mentioned, maybe bring the snare out a tiny bit

  On 11/14/2012 at 2:15 PM, isaki said:

  On 11/13/2012 at 9:43 PM, encym said:

New link:

 

http://soundcloud.com/encym/tousesoon

wow, this is really fantastic work. love the panning at the start. i wasn't expecting the gated part at 0:33 but it all works so well together! the drums sound good to me, though as mentioned, maybe bring the snare out a tiny bit

Thanks! This new version has several alterations, the most notable being a) louder drums and b) bass guitar added. Check and report back!

  On 11/14/2012 at 12:54 PM, Squee said:

Maybe just the snare then?

Take a listen now, changed it considerably once again. Including bass.