POLY

I like it, but would like more variations. Too repetitive imo, but a nice melancholic start for sure. I'd play around with variations of that melody line, flip it, shuffle or add notes, see what works best and introduce this later one. Maybe using another sound? It has enough potential.

Thank you for your comment, i will see what can i do !

i gotta agree, its a bit repetitive. but this really sounds nice.

Agree with everything that has already been said. Also, you should add some breaks as well because nothing much really happens.

But it sounds great so making the track more exciting should be easy for you :)