LOVERS teshie club wip

http://soundcloud.com/supergrandmatales324/lovers-teshie-club-demo

just sort of got the skeleton done so far so I took a clip of somewhere in the middle

11/4 with a 13/4 bit at parts

that main flanging ring modulated sound is annoying to me

overall i didn't "feel" this track but i understand the direction you are going in

it seems rather wishy washy and needs to have more of a hook or something to anchor it

i realize you are trying to play with odd time but it's not really serving a supreme purpose in the overall vibe

i suck at remembering other users' music but i'd say you've improved your skills. the chiptuney acidish synth that comes at around :30 doesn't sound so good. actually the melody seems too random, ths ound is ok. then it gets boring but i guess it's just because it's a skeleton.