Cybertone - Selfmade Funk

After a hazy birthday weekend I somehow created this duby hybrid track of a thing. Thoughts?

 

http://soundcloud.com/cybertone/selfmade-funk

Lovely tune man. Very hazy indeed. The percussion was awesome!

Could be hazier for me. I would really use some subtle sidechaning and more EQing, above all on the beat and way too loud bass-instrument. Over all, it's a nice listen.

  On 11/13/2012 at 4:38 AM, sergeantk said:

Lovely tune man. Very hazy indeed. The percussion was awesome!

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it, can't get enough of your new album( even ordered the CD+3'CD ).

 

 

  On 11/14/2012 at 1:41 PM, tokn said:

Could be hazier for me. I would really use some subtle sidechaning and more EQing, above all on the beat and way too loud bass-instrument. Over all, it's a nice listen.

Thanks for giving it a listen, I actually don't do the hazy dub thing very often so *shrug*. This definitely needs some EQ adjustment, I originally used headphones when I did them before. Thank you for the advice, always appreciated.

this is a great track man. but i other than whats been said i don't know anything else that could be done to it.

  On 11/15/2012 at 1:48 AM, Frankie5fingers said:

this is a great track man. but i other than whats been said i don't know anything else that could be done to it.

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the listen Frankie

cool layering

kick isn't loud enough

that side stick high pitched percussion sound started getting a bit annoying to me towards the end

tick tick tick tick

tick tick tick tick

also it's kinda short,i could deal with another 2 minutes or so completing the thought