new dub track

Drums feel a bit chunky, both in terms of texture and rhythm programming - more dynamics, shorter decays.

Nice bassline but the syncopation feels a little weird. Definitely doesn't make me think of dub. Maybe a bit longer notes.

The guitar is mixed sort of weird. Seems like it should be a bit louder (especially relative to the reverb) and also a little more distorted.

I think the reverb overall is mixed too loud. It's kind of crowding the mix. Also would feel much dubbier if it were a spring verb

Overall I think it needs more emptiness and space for the elements to breathe in.

I think the basic idea is cool but it needs a work. I could see this going somewhere other than dub, too. Like this could be really cool a little faster, and maybe in 3/4 with much sparser drums.

all i can think of when i hear this track is that movie monkey bone

sounds like a stoner rasta jam sesh

nice vibes