new sound!

I made this sound a week ago, it's kinda experimental/ambient?!
Conventional Hollow 1.58
https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/conventional-hollow
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Didn't touch anything for about a whole week, uhhh now I gotta find a way to produce hiGhEr quality!

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And 2 older

the 2nd part is too wierd but I think I'll look at the first part again and maybe work with that
https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/2356-sl1

Linked that in the other thread already... it's a little painful and later on ~4+ some sounds seem to be to loud or something,but I'm not even sure if it makes a diffrent because the whole song is kinda painful
https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/65sl1

well I just made this too
https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/71-sl1

didn't know it's so weak, I'll take the last one off don't wonder.

The drums in the last track were pretty interesting. A little more progression would have been nice though.

When I listen to it through my speaker I feel like everything is wrong and it even sounds preset,
on my headphones it's not that bad :)
Thx for listening FF!

https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/76sl1

listen & comment
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So, commenting on your most recent track:

This is pretty cool (I'm getting Garbage-era Ae vibes), with creative sound choices and it moves forward in a good way. A few things I'd suggest looking at:

1) The main squeaky melody loop is a strong part of the track, but you use it a bit too much without changing it. I would bring in some variations, either subtle or otherwise, by around the 1:30 mark at the latest to keep the momentum going.

2) I would bring the oscillating panned noise in and out of the track more, it's current there for nearly all of it, not sure it has to be, variation and careful changes are always good :)

3) The new melody that comes in at ~2:40 is interesting stuff, there's definitely room here to develop this further and take the track over the 4 or 5 minute mark, if you want to...

I like the selection of sounds but I'm distracted by the pumping on the compression. It's pretty interesting stuff though, I'd do what Bezhin says and take the noise out a bit more often as when it disappears at 2:47 I feel it really lifts the track.

thx for the comments! I'll look at it again, maybe I'll try to make it longer that would be fun.
like always this is pretty raw material, no automations as usual.

I have a new vst, I like it. Moog V time seems to be over (never is) !!