Favorite 2 Songs I've Ever Written

https://soundcloud.com/android_402/the-strings-of-saturn

https://soundcloud.com/android_402/archers-garden

Comments much appreciated!

First track: Piano bits remind me of Saint Saens, drums are lush. If you dropped the lead synth you could score movie trailers with that stuff. I think the synth is the only thing I have a problem with here, it kind of skeeters across the top distracting without really saying enough. Plus I'd make the high pass filter bit shorter so it's more dramatic. These are only minor gripes though and tbh I'd ignore them and keep plugging away as you've clearly got talent.

Second track is pretty flawless, you should score for film, really cinematic. Excellent development throughout.

this stuff is legit incredible. Amazing command of melody, structure and atmosphere. 3.20 to 3.60 of the second track is like damn. I love the way the classical-sounding elements mesh with the dynamic beats and electronics.

Let us know when you have a release available cause i'll be all over it.

*uses Google*

Hey, you do have some releases already! Nice one :-)

wow the sounds at 1:10 AFXed me

the ambient at the beginning of the 'saturn' track started to lose me (bloomin' awful short attention span) but then when it starts up at :48 it captures immediately and develops wonderfully. the drums are perfect :)

the archer track is spot on front to back!

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the whole song is very nice, the synth didn't get to me as strong as the rest of the track especially the pianos, I think at one part 3 pianos are playing diffrent stuff at the same time,I wonder if all the other pianos would work together with the beat
and towards the outro there is a "spaced" kick or some sound ~3,20, I'd like a whole part with those kind of stuff,
I wouldn't have had the idea but you already used this sound and it fits in very good,
I also like the idea of the outro,

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great track, the first part is very catchy the last part is really great too, i like this stuff, this ARP sound I want those sounds man! I'm not sure about the sound of the pianos in the last part. anyways very good work.

Thanks guys! And yes Lucy, I have a few self released albums through CDBaby and iTunes. 9 tracks in to my new album, which includes these 2 tracks. I'll let you guys know when it's finished

Love this stuff. Reminds me of Steve Jablonksy. Not to take anything away from your style but it just does. Love his stuff too.

This is excellent work man! The first track definitely change that synth sound...otherwise pretty damn awesome. Great job!