granty Posted January 25, 2013 Report Share Posted January 25, 2013 Happy clappy and badly mastered but just for fun: https://soundcloud.com/low-five/ill-miss-this-place Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide granty's signature Hide all signatures instagram.com/lo_five_ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted January 25, 2013 Report Share Posted January 25, 2013 you never cease to impress me man. this is wonderful. the only thing id say is to turn up that synth youve got playing the melody in the background (starts at 1.23 i wanna say). other than that everything else sounds great! keep up the great work :) Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1938241 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lucy Faringold Posted January 25, 2013 Report Share Posted January 25, 2013 really enjoyed this. My only minor comment is that I felt like the bassline was sticking a bit too close to the piano chords during the first two mins; would have liked it to have maybe picked out a different pattern at some point. But overall I love the vibe of this and the other stuff of yours that I've heard. Great work! Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1938254 Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted January 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2013 Thanks again folks :) both good points, think it needs few more breaks and fills sprinkled around to break it up a bit too. As before, thanks for taking the time to listen and give a useful appraisal. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide granty's signature Hide all signatures instagram.com/lo_five_ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1938494 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeantk Posted January 26, 2013 Report Share Posted January 26, 2013 Real choon! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sergeantk's signature Hide all signatures My music (zanderone) Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1938531 Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted January 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2013 Thanks chief Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide granty's signature Hide all signatures instagram.com/lo_five_ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1938633 Share on other sites More sharing options...
cruising for burgers Posted January 26, 2013 Report Share Posted January 26, 2013 lovely! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide cruising for burgers's signature Hide all signatures https://www.instagram.com/ancestralwaves/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1938686 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest No Pomo Posted January 26, 2013 Report Share Posted January 26, 2013 Sick Weather Channel vibe. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1938849 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeantk Posted January 26, 2013 Report Share Posted January 26, 2013 Upon relisten I have one minor criticism about the mixing. Did you compress the master bus? For some reason I feel like this track is lacking dynamic range. Sounds a bit brickwall'd. Especially the drums. That said I still think the composition in this track is wonderful. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide sergeantk's signature Hide all signatures My music (zanderone) Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1938855 Share on other sites More sharing options...
chassis Posted January 26, 2013 Report Share Posted January 26, 2013 A teeney tiny bit to much reverb on the drums for me, other than that solid work. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide chassis's signature Hide all signatures Reveal hidden contents Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1938870 Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted January 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2013 Criticism accepted. It was very much cobbled together on a Friday afternoon before clocking off. Normally I bounce the tracks down then add multipressor and limiters to the mixed file, but decided to do all that on the master bus thinking it'd save time (how the hell did you spot that sergeantk??). Yep, it does sound a bit Go Team with the drum reverb so might take another look at that - cheers folks, you rule! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide granty's signature Hide all signatures instagram.com/lo_five_ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1938916 Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted February 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2013 Just remixed and remastered this following everyone's feedback - changed the middle bit and added some flutes too: https://soundcloud.com/low-five/its-easier-this-way-remaster Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide granty's signature Hide all signatures instagram.com/lo_five_ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1952070 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted February 13, 2013 Report Share Posted February 13, 2013 sounds perfect! Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1952174 Share on other sites More sharing options...
747Music Posted February 13, 2013 Report Share Posted February 13, 2013 This is quite a wonderful song. It has a really nice vibe to it. Nice improvements on the newer version too. I have nothing to complain about. Solid work. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide 747Music's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1952227 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ambermonk Posted February 13, 2013 Report Share Posted February 13, 2013 I only listed to the second revamped version, but it sounds nice. It's like an up-tempo BoC track. It's especially good for going outside on a spring morning.I can't think of any suggestions to add for improvement. Nice work. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide ambermonk's signature Hide all signatures On 10/21/2015 at 9:51 AM, peace 7 said: To keep it real and analog, I'm gonna start posting to WATMM by writing my posts in fountain pen on hemp paper, putting them in bottles, and throwing them into the ocean. On 11/5/2013 at 7:51 PM, Sean Ae said: you have to watch those silent people, always trying to trick you with their silence Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1952235 Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted February 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2013 Thanks folks, you've given some invaluable feedback and its a blast when people like your stuff, very much appreciated :) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide granty's signature Hide all signatures instagram.com/lo_five_ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/77370-ill-miss-this-place/#findComment-1952262 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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