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Guest Frankie5fingers

you never cease to impress me man. this is wonderful. the only thing id say is to turn up that synth youve got playing the melody in the background (starts at 1.23 i wanna say). other than that everything else sounds great!

keep up the great work :)

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Guest Lucy Faringold

really enjoyed this. My only minor comment is that I felt like the bassline was sticking a bit too close to the piano chords during the first two mins; would have liked it to have maybe picked out a different pattern at some point. But overall I love the vibe of this and the other stuff of yours that I've heard. Great work!

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Thanks again folks :) both good points, think it needs few more breaks and fills sprinkled around to break it up a bit too. As before, thanks for taking the time to listen and give a useful appraisal.

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Upon relisten I have one minor criticism about the mixing. Did you compress the master bus? For some reason I feel like this track is lacking dynamic range. Sounds a bit brickwall'd. Especially the drums.

 

That said I still think the composition in this track is wonderful.

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A teeney tiny bit to much reverb on the drums for me, other than that solid work.

 

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Criticism accepted. It was very much cobbled together on a Friday afternoon before clocking off. Normally I bounce the tracks down then add multipressor and limiters to the mixed file, but decided to do all that on the master bus thinking it'd save time (how the hell did you spot that sergeantk??).

 

Yep, it does sound a bit Go Team with the drum reverb so might take another look at that - cheers folks, you rule!

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  • 3 weeks later...

This is quite a wonderful song. It has a really nice vibe to it. Nice improvements on the newer version too. I have nothing to complain about. Solid work.

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I only listed to the second revamped version, but it sounds nice. It's like an up-tempo BoC track. It's especially good for going outside on a spring morning.

I can't think of any suggestions to add for improvement. Nice work.

 

  On 10/21/2015 at 9:51 AM, peace 7 said:

To keep it real and analog, I'm gonna start posting to WATMM by writing my posts in fountain pen on hemp paper, putting them in bottles, and throwing them into the ocean.

 

  On 11/5/2013 at 7:51 PM, Sean Ae said:

you have to watch those silent people, always trying to trick you with their silence

 

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Thanks folks, you've given some invaluable feedback and its a blast when people like your stuff, very much appreciated :)

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