6 new

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https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/745-64sl1

https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/65465-sl2

https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/5164114sl1

https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/selfremembering-the-twist

https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/984-1

https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/4568sl1

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also feel free to dizz mah trackz

I'm sorry to tell you this, but most people are not going to sit through six tracks. If I were you, I'd pick out the best one (or maybe two) and then share it on here.

Listened to the third track. Some pretty nice pads and stuff. The ending could use a little work though. Don't know if it ends like it does because it's a WIP or not, but it feels a bit weird as it is now. At least add a fade-out or something.

2nd one had some cool sounds, like how it evolves i guess, could maybe use more variation with that main synth...

FF
I'd pretty much like to do that, but 5 ppl say it's song 1-2

next 5 ppl say 3-4 and next 5 ppl say it's 5-6

how can I get this sorted out`? I'm very happy about feedback, gives me motivation and ideas but
so far it didn't help me out in my selection :/

when everything is improv, no track had more than 2h of worktime
than how do I get stuff sorted :D

so far I'm trying to listen on stereo, that helps alot.

thx for feedback @ machinemask

Put up the track(s) YOU like the most.

sounds smart I should try it

- i got 2 hearts

one on the secound and one on the last...

I'll listen to them later and see if those are the ones I liked best... but yeah... I was already thinking about how to deal with that shiat, normally I can decide very easily and get a op about art
just with sound/music it's wierd.

https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/6559-sl1
zero days old

^ is wierd


next one was done when superhigh and tired as most of the times, what ya think?
https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/11111111111111111111-34234

  On 2/27/2013 at 1:28 AM, randomAmateur said:

 

 

https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/selfremembering-the-twist

 

 

would like to see you build on this, that is a delicious synth and I like the sampling at the start

to be honest i only skimmed through all 6. From what I heard you've improved a Lot since the first time you posted songs on here. It sounds like you have more control over your sound design and song structures. I will come back to listen to these later