Rbrmyofr Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 http://soundcloud.com/splitradix/splitradix-78-swings Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Rbrmyofr's signature Hide all signatures https://splitradix.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salvatorin Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 Love me some tite computer syncopation. A fully enjoayble, nicely melodic choon. Love the chord progression, it's not one I hear a lot in electronic music. The pads that the tune sits on about halfway through are rite lush, m8. Good braindance. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Salvatorin's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/#findComment-1972360 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salvatorin Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 If I have any constructive criticism, it's that the last minute is kind of unnecesary to the track as a whole, to me it kind of distracted from the euphoric middle section. Maybe you could shorten it or do something to the middle section to give it a real dynamic climax. Other than tat it's a solid work. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Salvatorin's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/#findComment-1972362 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rbrmyofr Posted March 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 Yeah, I wavered a bit between doing the change near the end or not but I ended up liking it, the first half is so saccharine it needed a tiny downer in my opinion. Thanks for the comments by the way. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Rbrmyofr's signature Hide all signatures https://splitradix.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/#findComment-1972365 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 very cool, love the progression. but i gotta disagree with Salv. i think that last min is pretty good, but to have the track end on it makes it sound off. i would have that section blend slowly into another section like the middle then have the track end. it would make it come full circle. overall, great track. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/#findComment-1972488 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest active galaxies Posted March 24, 2013 Report Share Posted March 24, 2013 Impressive stuff that gets increasingly complex and more interesting as it progresses, I'm with Salvatorin on the chord progression: this is what makes the whole thing work. I'm fine with the final section of the track, which sits well with the rest of it in my opinion, the only thing that felt a little awkward is the drum roll bit around 2:50 where you segue into the new section. This took me out of the track a bit, perhaps a smoother way of joining this up would make it cohere more tightly? Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/#findComment-1973393 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCM Posted March 24, 2013 Report Share Posted March 24, 2013 Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide BCM's signature Hide all signatures Bandcamp | Spotify | SoundCloud | Amazon | Apple Music | YouTube | YouTube Music | Deezer | Google Play Music Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/#findComment-1973397 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salvatorin Posted March 25, 2013 Report Share Posted March 25, 2013 I actually have come to like the ending just as much as the middle. What I think should be added is some subtle dynamics. Everything is all at the same level right now which is fine and dandy but the tune could pop more. Some sensitive eq'ing would do this some good. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Salvatorin's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/#findComment-1973711 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tamagotchi San Posted March 25, 2013 Report Share Posted March 25, 2013 Good track. Really nice pads and the progression is great too. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Tamagotchi San's signature Hide all signatures let me pause this trance "lol, humans" - anonymous tree ps. I stole this from very honest. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/#findComment-1973731 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest PolyKrome Posted March 26, 2013 Report Share Posted March 26, 2013 Yep yep, nice track man! Nice melodic ideas i enjoyed this! Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/#findComment-1974006 Share on other sites More sharing options...
crx091081gb Posted March 26, 2013 Report Share Posted March 26, 2013 This is tasty, that lead sound is lush. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide crx091081gb's signature Hide all signatures Recent tunes Reveal hidden contents https://soundcloud.com/crx091081gb/no-authority-without-hate https://soundcloud.com/crx091081gb/terminator-justice Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78144-78-swings/#findComment-1974020 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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