Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 3, 2013 Report Share Posted April 3, 2013 Hey! :) I'm new here and have to say, I really like the forums! I'm going to listen to as many songs as I can and try to give feedback! :) Meanwhile, I would like some feedback myself! If you like it, hate it, whatever, feel free to comment your opinion! :) I'm not sure how to link it so the soundcloud player appears haha.. [sc5]84416328[/sc5] The genre is Electro House and made with Fruity Loops Studio 10! :) Please let me know what you think! -Urbanturkin Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
zkreso Posted April 3, 2013 Report Share Posted April 3, 2013 Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1978262 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 3, 2013 Report Share Posted April 3, 2013 On 4/3/2013 at 8:38 PM, zkreso said: Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. Allright I'm sorry you feel that way! :D I actually wanted it a little commercial. Thanks for the comment! :) Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1978266 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted April 3, 2013 Report Share Posted April 3, 2013 On 4/3/2013 at 8:38 PM, zkreso said: Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. ...and making commercial music is bad, because...? His tune might actually be sellable and some people would probably buy it unlike 90% of the shit that gets posted here. Should everyone just keep on trying to make terrible Analord ripoffs instead? Anyway, your tune is not really my style but I can definitely see what you're going for. Mixwise I would say that the main lead (2:31) is too loud - or something? Try re-EQing it because the drums kinda drown in the lead and then you could probably side chain the shit out of the drums if you wanted. That would definitely help. But to begin with I would probably just re-EQ the synth. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1978275 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 3, 2013 Report Share Posted April 3, 2013 On 4/3/2013 at 8:56 PM, Squee said: On 4/3/2013 at 8:38 PM, zkreso said: Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. ...and making commercial music is bad, because...? His tune might actually be sellable and some people would probably buy it unlike 90% of the shit that gets posted here. Should everyone just keep on trying to make terrible Analord ripoffs instead? Anyway, your tune is not really my style but I can definitely see what you're going for. Mixwise I would say that the main lead (2:31) is too loud - or something? Try re-EQing it because the drums kinda drown in the lead and then you could probably side chain the shit out of the drums if you wanted. That would definitely help. But to begin with I would probably just re-EQ the synth. Thanks for the comment! :) Yeah the main lead is too loud...I realized it before I uploaded the song but the file got corrupted -.- And no backups were made...So if I want to change anything I have to remake the whole song. :D I probably will do it someday...but for now, I don´t have the time! :D Thanks! -Urbanturkin Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1978280 Share on other sites More sharing options...
747Music Posted April 4, 2013 Report Share Posted April 4, 2013 Hey this isn't bad at all. Quite commercial, but I agree with Squee, commercial doesn't mean bad. that sucks you lost the data for the song. This song really isn't my cup of tea, but I'm looking forward to hearing what else you come up with. Cheers. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide 747Music's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1978420 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adieu Posted April 4, 2013 Report Share Posted April 4, 2013 On 4/3/2013 at 8:56 PM, Squee said: On 4/3/2013 at 8:38 PM, zkreso said: Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. ...and making commercial music is bad, because...? His tune might actually be sellable and some people would probably buy it unlike 90% of the shit that gets posted here. Should everyone just keep on trying to make terrible Analord ripoffs instead? Anyway, your tune is not really my style but I can definitely see what you're going for. Mixwise I would say that the main lead (2:31) is too loud - or something? Try re-EQing it because the drums kinda drown in the lead and then you could probably side chain the shit out of the drums if you wanted. That would definitely help. But to begin with I would probably just re-EQ the synth. You're the moderator of this forum and you just called 90% of the music here shit. Weow... Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Adieu's signature Hide all signatures There will be new love from the ashes of us. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1978476 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted April 4, 2013 Report Share Posted April 4, 2013 On 4/4/2013 at 3:12 AM, AdieuErsatzEnnui said: On 4/3/2013 at 8:56 PM, Squee said: On 4/3/2013 at 8:38 PM, zkreso said: Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. ...and making commercial music is bad, because...? His tune might actually be sellable and some people would probably buy it unlike 90% of the shit that gets posted here. Should everyone just keep on trying to make terrible Analord ripoffs instead? Anyway, your tune is not really my style but I can definitely see what you're going for. Mixwise I would say that the main lead (2:31) is too loud - or something? Try re-EQing it because the drums kinda drown in the lead and then you could probably side chain the shit out of the drums if you wanted. That would definitely help. But to begin with I would probably just re-EQ the synth. You're the moderator of this forum and you just called 90% of the music here shit. Weow... You know I don't actually mean 90% of it - exaggeration furthers understanding, right? :) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1978577 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 4, 2013 Report Share Posted April 4, 2013 On 4/4/2013 at 1:08 AM, 747Music said: Hey this isn't bad at all. Quite commercial, but I agree with Squee, commercial doesn't mean bad. that sucks you lost the data for the song. This song really isn't my cup of tea, but I'm looking forward to hearing what else you come up with. Cheers. Hey thanks! :) I'm working on a new song right now! This time I'm going to focus on the quality of the song! :) Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1978663 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 7, 2013 Report Share Posted April 7, 2013 Anymore comments guys? :) Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1980211 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCM Posted April 7, 2013 Report Share Posted April 7, 2013 my girlfriend fucking loves this. me, on the other hand... Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide BCM's signature Hide all signatures Bandcamp | Spotify | SoundCloud | Amazon | Apple Music | YouTube | YouTube Music | Deezer | Google Play Music Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1980276 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 7, 2013 Report Share Posted April 7, 2013 On 4/7/2013 at 1:56 PM, BCM said: my girlfriend fucking loves this. me, on the other hand... Haha your girlfriend has good taste! ;) Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1980349 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 Nobody else? :) My song has got tons of attention on SC lately! Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1981132 Share on other sites More sharing options...
4d0 Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 it's on the simple, shallow end of the stick Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide 4d0's signature Hide all signatures Support for the government is a Stockholm syndrome. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1981142 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 Make sure to give other people feedback as well or else nobody will give you feedback. I know you've already commented on a couple of tracks, but the more the better. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1981144 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 8, 2013 Report Share Posted April 8, 2013 Yes ofcourse, so sorry! :) Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1981147 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caged Element Posted April 9, 2013 Report Share Posted April 9, 2013 On 4/3/2013 at 8:38 PM, zkreso said: Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. I have to agree. A for effort tho :-) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Caged Element's signature Hide all signatures Bandcamp: https://cagedelement.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1981592 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caged Element Posted April 9, 2013 Report Share Posted April 9, 2013 (edited) I like Aperture Audio. Edited April 9, 2013 by Aural Unrest Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Caged Element's signature Hide all signatures Bandcamp: https://cagedelement.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1981594 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 9, 2013 Report Share Posted April 9, 2013 Thanks for the comment! Damn your avatar is freaky! :D Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1981662 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caged Element Posted April 9, 2013 Report Share Posted April 9, 2013 (edited) Thanks! Edited April 9, 2013 by Aural Unrest Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Caged Element's signature Hide all signatures Bandcamp: https://cagedelement.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78315-new-electro-house/#findComment-1981680 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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