The Bro - Blue Skys (demo)

Hey guys fresh one from me. Sort of different. Anyways hope you like. Safe!! :D

https://soundcloud.com/thebro/the-bro-blue-skys-demo

Bump. Anyone lol??

It's big tricky to comment on a demo like this when we don't know what you're planning to do with it. Like, are the sounds going to change, do you plan on changing the structure etc.

I'd like to comment but I don't want to waste anyone's time.

Skies?

90s feel, it's nice, head-noddy

  On 4/24/2013 at 2:00 PM, Friendly Foil said:

It's big tricky to comment on a demo like this when we don't know what you're planning to do with it. Like, are the sounds going to change, do you plan on changing the structure etc.

 

I'd like to comment but I don't want to waste anyone's time.

No do comment because I'd like to know what to do next to it. I feel I've got the bones of something decent but if not then you know let me know.

  On 4/24/2013 at 2:27 PM, Gocab said:

Skies?

Sorry my spelling ain't great he he.

I like it. I'd like to hear some phat moog style synths in there or some bright bouncy stabs to complement that synth bass you've got plucking away.

But that's just what I would do with it.

Good start!

Edit: on second listen, perhaps a few different breaks too.

cheers

da bro is in da house!

get some sexy voice samples and play some lush synth solo somewhere around the track...

  On 4/24/2013 at 8:50 PM, THIS IS MICHAEL JACKSON said:

da bro is in da house!

get some sexy voice samples and play some lush synth solo somewhere around the track...

On it!

Needs more Seinfeld slap bass

The structure of the track is alright, and so are the melodies... but that slap bass thing... Either you need to make it sound way less dry or replace it with something better. It really doesn't do the track any favors.

Changed anything since posting it in here?