granty Posted May 22, 2013 Report Share Posted May 22, 2013 My latest effort - reminds me of Nick Kershaw for some reason... hope you like! https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/ridin-on-air Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide granty's signature Hide all signatures instagram.com/lo_five_ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78985-ridin-on-air/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted May 22, 2013 Report Share Posted May 22, 2013 pretty cool. id say though that first half kinda goes on too long, especially since all the action is in the second half. i would also change up the piano progression too. it does get a little stale after a while. cool track man. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78985-ridin-on-air/#findComment-2008375 Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted May 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2013 Cheers for listening - it was one of those where I couldn't figure out where to take it, so there isn't much variation in the chords/melody. I might record some guitar over it, see how that goes... Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide granty's signature Hide all signatures instagram.com/lo_five_ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78985-ridin-on-air/#findComment-2008385 Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted May 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2013 (edited) Made a few changes - trimmed all the fat off: https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/ridin-on-air Edited May 23, 2013 by westhead Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide granty's signature Hide all signatures instagram.com/lo_five_ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78985-ridin-on-air/#findComment-2009100 Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloud capture Posted May 23, 2013 Report Share Posted May 23, 2013 Very nice positive vibes. Clear & bright pads & chime sounds balance the somewhat distorted acoustic drums nicely. All the melodies work together really well. Thanks for sharing. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78985-ridin-on-air/#findComment-2009170 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted May 23, 2013 Report Share Posted May 23, 2013 oh man, this sounds amazing now. great changes! Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78985-ridin-on-air/#findComment-2009174 Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted May 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2013 Thanks folks, appreciate it ;) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide granty's signature Hide all signatures instagram.com/lo_five_ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78985-ridin-on-air/#findComment-2009203 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stock Posted May 23, 2013 Report Share Posted May 23, 2013 Great track indeed (didn't listen to the first version so I can't compare the two). Really like the piano, it sounds very clear. Nice work Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Stock's signature Hide all signatures Weekly Beats 2020 let's goooooo Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/78985-ridin-on-air/#findComment-2009289 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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