[Downtempo] Qatarsis - Dead Landscape

Hey

I'd really like to know what you think about my new Track - Dead Landscape

i appreciate any kind of suggestions critics etc.!

hope you like what you hear ;)
enjoy !

https://soundcloud.com/philibos/dead-landscape

best regards

qatarsis

Nice, I like the spacy hiphop'ish vibe when the snare comes in, nice use of stereo as well with the sweeping background pads. Good job.

i can dig it ... he's right about the hip hopness... tis good vibespace... it points me at Plaistow Flex Out

Very filmic, nice noir vibe.

The... is it a voice? that sounds like it's saying 'landscape' is a bit hammy, and the reverb gives it a bathroom feel that's at odds with the 'landscape' theme.

Some minimal contrasting sections or breaks where a few choice sounds can inhabit a more empty space without the pads/ambience etc (think Demdike Stare) might be nice.

Too critical for a first post?

thanks alot for your feedback guys :) definately appreciated !

@mnemonix, yea it's actually my own voice, and i get your point about the bathroom feel, i should fix this metallic feel, you're quite right :)
i really love demdike stare btw :P and it's not too critical for me, it's good to hear some contructive opinions, too. i dig it